Jericho - comments.

Camera-work, All establishing shots no close ups or other shots included.
                      , All very steady camera-work
                      , All mostly one angle, could experimented with other angles.
                      , No movement in camera-work
Sound, No unnecessary sound
          , music fitted well with the fact it was a childrens film and theme.
          , No unwanted background was captured during the sequence.
Conventions, title clearly shown
                   , showed all names involved clearly
                   , story and characters introduced well
                   , could be more info on characters names.
Mise en scene, use of animation is smooth but sometimes jerky
                      , title movement smooth
                      , lighting was natural
                      , location and setting easily established
                      , colours bright good for kids
Target Audience, 2 - 8 simple story line but still some action.
Edting, The editing is very smooth and makes it look very professional. the editing in continual.

It would be suitable for local film festivals as a small independent production company would be welcome there and gain comunity support